Wednesday 18 March 2009

alone as I ever have been

what am I bemoaning
but my chance
to experience 'this'

my chance to go
to hell and back
experience 'bliss'

4 comments:

Lluvia said...

Intense. Word choice, rhyme perfect. One of my favorites of yours. Last night, I started working on something you might like. I will let you know which one when I post it.

Lluvia said...

The ones I last night aren't the one I referred to... still simmering. And I was on your post and wanted to comment.

Lluvia said...

I know not whether the poem will ever come to fruition. Sigh. However, I have another you will probably like. I think it floats like many of yours do. Take care, Nathan. I wish you well. Lluvia

Lluvia said...

This is the closest I have come so far to what I am trying to achieve. Maybe take a peek when you have time? No hurry. Hope everything is well. Take care, Lluvia
http://poetonaleash.blogspot.com/2009/04/sacrifice-abandoned.html