Intense. Word choice, rhyme perfect. One of my favorites of yours. Last night, I started working on something you might like. I will let you know which one when I post it.
I know not whether the poem will ever come to fruition. Sigh. However, I have another you will probably like. I think it floats like many of yours do. Take care, Nathan. I wish you well. Lluvia
This is the closest I have come so far to what I am trying to achieve. Maybe take a peek when you have time? No hurry. Hope everything is well. Take care, Lluvia http://poetonaleash.blogspot.com/2009/04/sacrifice-abandoned.html
Intense. Word choice, rhyme perfect. One of my favorites of yours. Last night, I started working on something you might like. I will let you know which one when I post it.
ReplyDeleteThe ones I last night aren't the one I referred to... still simmering. And I was on your post and wanted to comment.
ReplyDeleteI know not whether the poem will ever come to fruition. Sigh. However, I have another you will probably like. I think it floats like many of yours do. Take care, Nathan. I wish you well. Lluvia
ReplyDeleteThis is the closest I have come so far to what I am trying to achieve. Maybe take a peek when you have time? No hurry. Hope everything is well. Take care, Lluvia
ReplyDeletehttp://poetonaleash.blogspot.com/2009/04/sacrifice-abandoned.html